Comment on group 1's presentation

As we were researching on the same topic, the things we found were almost the same which goes to show that we need to improve on our research skills. However, what set their group apart from ours was that they had interesting pictures to go with, unlike ours which had little pictures on it. The pictures made it easier to understand what they were trying to implement about their points. For ours, we had only words which made it seem very dull. They also created the timeline for the Suzhou industrial park so that people had a clearer understanding of the park. For us, we did not include the years which made it seem quite confusing on how long the industrial park lasted. However, I still feel that their presentation lacked a bit of information as half their paper was filled with drawings .